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[Turnabout Sheezy]

too buggy...

Next time when you make a flash like this, make sure the button for the next piece of text goes to a prespecified frame. Using the nextframe actionscript is annoying, especially since you didnt take into account that after some conversations an animation was about to start, resulting in the user to need to press a ludicrous amount of times to either continue or see the animation frame by frame (which didnt exactly help the overall quality of the animation). Next time, before you submit something, make sure all of the bugs or annoying things are gone, so that people will spend more attention to the story and animation, instead of being irritated over small things like the next button.

As for me, I lost interest half way, after the animation just broke down in the middle once, and afterwards I had to keep pressing the button to see the animation frame by frame. Therefore, even though the art is nice, I didnt pay attention to the story.

As for sound, well, I liked the soundtrack of Phoenix Wright, so I guess this one is okay as well. For graphics, everything seems okay. No distinctive style, but still good enough to notice. For the rest; just make sure you remove the bugs in the next animation, and it will be received a whole lot better.

forgetreality responds:

Thanks, actually one of the few comments that includes good criticism =)

Sadly actionscript isn't my strong point, but I'll do my best in future flashes.

[Flash Website Tut]

Way too much text

This would have been a great tutorial if you had more graphical examples (like some progress screenshots, instead of only the final product). Also, there is way too much text. You could have made the whole thing a lot easier to read (and understand for that matter) if you used basic formatting like paragraphs.

EZCheeser responds:

Alright, I'll keep those things in mind if I ever decide to make another tutorial. Thank you for not being a dick like the previous guy. Thank you for the constructive criticism.